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Post by yn on Nov 10, 2015 16:22:12 GMT -8
i'll just copypaste from burb INSTA 50k! yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay "Yeeny, why is your nano suddenly all death and misery?" if by death and misery means glorious killfest then it's because good writers borrow. great writers steal copy/paste :>
and im a great writer, sir
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Burbeting
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Post by Burbeting on Nov 11, 2015 13:50:22 GMT -8
WC: 50 000+
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Post by Retro on Nov 11, 2015 22:53:45 GMT -8
Grats, Burb!
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Post by yn on Nov 11, 2015 23:35:19 GMT -8
grats burbsy!!!
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Burbeting
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Post by Burbeting on Nov 14, 2015 4:25:29 GMT -8
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Post by yn on Nov 14, 2015 4:39:33 GMT -8
omg part 3 is uppppp
i needs to catch up with nano so i can reaaaaaaadddddddd
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Nov 14, 2015 10:03:33 GMT -8
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Post by OceanicAir on Nov 14, 2015 10:03:33 GMT -8
I have to say I've really, really, really been enjoying this story, Burb. I love the suspense in which I can't be sure who's going to live or die. And I can't wait until the next part!
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Burbeting
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Post by Burbeting on Nov 14, 2015 10:17:20 GMT -8
I have to say I've really, really, really been enjoying this story, Burb. I love the suspense in which I can't be sure who's going to live or die. And I can't wait until the next part! Thanks for the compliment, really appreciate it! Have you read till the end of Part 3 already? I will say that the idea for chapters 15/16 was the first one I had for the story.
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Post by OceanicAir on Nov 14, 2015 15:15:24 GMT -8
I have to say I've really, really, really been enjoying this story, Burb. I love the suspense in which I can't be sure who's going to live or die. And I can't wait until the next part! Thanks for the compliment, really appreciate it! Have you read till the end of Part 3 already? I will say that the idea for chapters 15/16 was the first one I had for the story. Yup! I read it last night lol. Extremely entertaining. I love these sort of stories were there are people doing extreme things to survive. And again, the suspense is awesome!
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Post by Ourobolus on Nov 15, 2015 8:31:05 GMT -8
Ok. I've been a huge slacker the past three days. Gotta keep up.
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Post by Kalor on Nov 17, 2015 10:55:04 GMT -8
I'm about 6,000 words behind after being busy the past couple of days so I'm trying to catch up now. It will take me a couple of days but as long as I can hit the targets I should be able to get back to speed. I'm in another lull with my plot right now while I try to establish a new lead character so it's slow going right now.
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Post by yn on Nov 17, 2015 13:51:51 GMT -8
im 3000 words behind myself >____< going to have to play catch up also!
lulls are hard to wade through.... but you can do it kalor!!! im on chapter 4 myself... chapter 3 was supposed to end at 30k, but it ended early at 25k... .___. it was a crappy one anyway, so im glad it was shortened
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Post by Ourobolus on Nov 17, 2015 17:40:32 GMT -8
30k! Luckily I'm almost at a part with a ton of dialogue, so that should help it along.
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Burbeting
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Post by Burbeting on Nov 21, 2015 15:18:34 GMT -8
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Post by yn on Nov 21, 2015 15:35:58 GMT -8
good work bear! :D
i'm starting my chapter 5 now. hauuuuuuu
and im grabbing your part 4 so i can read it at work tomorrow <3
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Post by Ourobolus on Nov 22, 2015 11:57:31 GMT -8
Almost 34k. I need to write a ton today.
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Burbeting
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Post by Burbeting on Nov 27, 2015 11:23:25 GMT -8
After 90 300 words, Five Parts and 220 Google Docs pages, the first draft is now complete! docs.google.com/document/d/1ZFhOR82sgyonDgGhoCpUp5JRIoLGF06AaknXHSnjPnY/editI will add some extra scenes on last few days, so the final WC might be 91k or the like. Also, I'm going to make a seperate google doc for some interesting tidbits about all the characters, chapter titles and story-arcs that I abandoned during the writing process. There is actually quite alot of those, so I want to dump them somewhere  .
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Post by yn on Nov 29, 2015 4:47:53 GMT -8
OH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
50k! *dances*
omg im super tired now >___<
i shall finish reading your story bearbs!!! <3
*dies
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Burbeting
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Post by Burbeting on Nov 29, 2015 7:18:37 GMT -8
Nice work yeen ^__^. Juse in time too!
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Post by yn on Nov 30, 2015 4:59:29 GMT -8
hi bearbs!
i finished reading your nano!
that was a massive piece of work that you did in a month's span! O____O amazing~ i struggled even getting to 50k hahaha
i like how the characters interacted with each other, specially the siblings. my favourite is probably sebastian. he is quiet but seems like he has inner strength kind of person.
the games were also all very interesting! my favourite was the voting game :D
sylvia was entertaining but she gets a bit caricature-like by the end because her manners of speech and behaviours are repeated over and over again. i was more interested in harrison by the end-game.
i think grammar and spelling probably can use a polish but well done on finishing the story! good job!
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Nov 30, 2015 6:55:04 GMT -8
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Post by Swamped on Nov 30, 2015 6:55:04 GMT -8
OH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH 50k! *dances* omg im super tired now >___< i shall finish reading your story bearbs!!! <3 *dies Wow, awesome, congrats! Same goes to all others who won as well!
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